November feedback

An intriguing twist in your script shows a good sense for the narrative and promise of an intrigiung opening sequence with a clear hook. Your analysis of codes and conventions is thprough amd inked to the Maltese Falcon showing good understanding. I think you mean sidekick.

In your evaluation and your pitch to me you will need to explain how characters are represented and how the story will develop.

You are working at level 2/3for research and planning  

To reach level you must;

Storyboard

Analyse another opening sequence perhaps from a film noir.  

Film footage

Edit, considering sound and titles to add meaning and atmosphere

 Manage your time effectively

Evaluate your preliminary task